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Shadowdusk
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since 2009-09-07
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0 posted 2009-09-08 04:30 AM


And when Death descends to claim you,
close your eyes.
Sing for me, I swear I will hear every word you say, and whatever happens,
don't stop singing.
And if you hear the heavenly choir join you,
don't open your eyes,
keep singing, and I will hear you,no matter what,
and I will wake you up
when all the songs are over
and there's nothing
left to say...

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GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

1 posted 2009-09-08 06:19 AM


And then face our fates together
even if we face rough weather
and we will turn again to life
and put away our earthly strife.

anniepimm54
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 110

2 posted 2009-09-08 07:28 AM


Beautiful poem! but death should be met with the eyes open, that way you can see the beauty of heaven as you journey towards the angels
Well penned

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