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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2009-09-07 01:38 AM




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Honeybunch
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1 posted 2009-09-07 02:06 AM


Indeed they do, dear Alison.  I have to start a new garden now around one lonely small tree but already the birds are visiting which I take as a good sign.

Helen

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2 posted 2009-09-07 02:33 AM


No doubt they do ,flowers speak volumes and in a simple way you have depicted it.


Love Esha


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3 posted 2009-09-07 02:36 AM



growing a haiku...

brilliant  


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4 posted 2009-09-07 03:35 AM


Helen, Esha and Shelli,

You have made me smile so late this night.  Thank each of you for reading and taking the time to leave such lovely comments.

Love,
Alison

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5 posted 2009-09-07 08:05 AM


kewl hockey little one..sure is a blank stare in YOUR photo though?
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6 posted 2009-09-07 10:10 AM


Heh, I like this ~ So simple, but beautiful at the same moment. Alison, great stuff.


ARCTIC WIND

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7 posted 2009-09-07 12:37 PM


"growing a haiku" ~ What a novel idea! You are so creative, Lasky Girl!!! ~ and your photography captured the exquisite beauty of that poppy! The colour is brilliant. Quite the photographer, ye be, Sweetie! I can still visualize a coffee table book with your captioned photos that capture the beauty of Alaska!

Love you!

Linda

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8 posted 2009-09-07 05:00 PM


Simple but very beautiful haiku, Alison.
Poppies always remind me of being 6 years old and living near a highway in Salem, Oregon with an embankment of the most beautiful poppies.
                                Ida

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9 posted 2009-09-07 05:10 PM


Hello Alison, difficult for a french to consider the expression "growing a puppy" now I know and your haiku is quite a treasure, I took it out and the photo is outsatnding. thanks for the beautiful poem.

yann

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10 posted 2009-09-07 09:09 PM


Poppies honour the fallen brave.

And they do indeed catch the senses, just as your lovely Haiku does.

The sight of the great poppy meadows which cover the battlefields of France, where the western world vindicated its freedom, are a breathtaking and humbling sight.

And all the roads that I've been strolling down... now I've found they all seem to be marooned. So profoundly doomed.

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11 posted 2009-09-08 06:29 AM


Beautiful poem Alison, lovely picture of the poppy flower too.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

brneyedgrly
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12 posted 2009-09-08 04:19 PM



I second a coffee table book!!

          

      do it, girly

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13 posted 2009-09-10 02:30 PM


Excellent haiku!  I can not write them but admire them and keep trying!

This is one of the best I have ever read!  Beautiful.  to me, a haiku should reach in and touch the senses and stimulate the mind all the while being lovely and personal to read.  You have done it all with this one!

Jan

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14 posted 2009-09-10 03:36 PM


Beauty and frailty combined with such expressive power.

A delight.

Love,
Margherita

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15 posted 2009-09-10 05:57 PM


Excellent !

I have a Poppy that looks exactly like the one in your photo. (same color; etc.)!

much applause for this post !

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16 posted 2009-09-13 02:07 AM


Thank you all for taking the time to make these warm and kind comments.  I am really happy to be around such kind, generous and talented people.

These photo/haiku are my form of relaxing.  I love to create them and I love to share them.

Thank you for reading along with me.

Love,
Alison

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17 posted 2009-09-21 03:17 AM




Awwwwwwwwwwwww, that's just too cute, dearest Alison! It's truly amazing how, even while still frames of pictures don't do nature total justice in any case, how we can still capture so much in one frame alone like this!

(huggies) Your haiku is truly a moment of Zen for me and many more, dearest Alison, thanks for providing that halcyon hearth as always!

XOXO,
Lisping Hibiscus

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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18 posted 2009-09-21 03:54 AM


I love Haiku ... and poppies too. Nicely written ~tera


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19 posted 2009-09-22 02:04 AM


Dearest Lisping Hibiscus,

Thank you, friend of mine.  I have this one on my desktop at work - it is kind of Zen for me too.  I love poppies and I love Hibiscus!

xooxox
Alison

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terasinas

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment.

Alison

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