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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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USA

0 posted 2009-09-06 06:23 PM





Find True Love

Longing for your love
Longing for everything
Of life
Longing for your answer
Looking at it
At my life
At my doorstep
Where I can open every door
See where love's standing
for me
Help me to find true love
Help me
Before I fall
Before I call
for love
Upon the nights
Where the stars shone it's way
Let the streets of lights shines brightly

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-09-06 06:27 PM


Yo dear Vandana,

I really enjoy your love poems.  This is very good work.

Love Bobby

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2009-09-06 07:02 PM


Love is passionate and strong. I like how you don't loose touch with its meaning, how love feels.


ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
3 posted 2009-09-06 09:41 PM



Love is what makes the world go round and

true love is a beautiful thing. I hope you find it my dear and soon. love.

Lindsay

Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2009-09-06 09:45 PM


Where I can open every door
See where love's standing
for me

~*~

Vandana...

You've been here a long time;
you know what it takes to be a
heartfelt poet...

You continue to stretch your heart
feel, and believe ...

continue your writings...

there are so many of us who enjoy
your moments.




brneyedgrly
Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
5 posted 2009-09-07 12:06 PM



such longing felt in your words

            


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