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You Still Walk With Me
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You Still Walk With Me |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110
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 You Still Walk With Me I hear your footsteps following me, they remind me you are still there. your memory perfect in my mind, even the curls that where in your hair. I remember the tears in the rain, that kissed your perfect cheeks like the red on a rose. I was captured with your smile, that made my knees go weak. As the blue in the sky reflected in your eyes, I know that you can see. through the holes in the floor of heaven, you are watching over me. I know that they are your footprints, I see in the sand every day. I know that they belong to you, As they are always walking my way.. Annie 8-08 09 [This message has been edited by anniepimm54 (09-05-2009 04:25 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful, dear Annie. You have been missed. Loved the comforting message in this and its poetic rendering. Love, Margherita |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Awwww Thank you Margherita for missing me and your lovely comments  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I really liked this poem. Wonderful second first post! lol   ARCTIC WIND |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Thank you Arctic wind thats very sweet of you |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Annie that was a real delight to read, poignant and enjoyable, great write. love Lindsay |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Thank you Lindsay thats really sweet of you |
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