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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2009-09-03 06:16 PM

Tip Toe Touch

The pattered rain foregone again to moist twilight
By filtered moon, as smiling threads of silver slight
Oh tap of time, a quiet storm that brews inside
As ne’er forgotten, etchings raised by heart abide

Postured to the open book and worthy breeze
Cascading fleet of imaged rites just as I please
Indent of dance speaks fingers nimble to be quick
In cadence soft, the value of collected hours tick

And might the whispered sighs of night prevail
Left message moving through the air enchanted tale
Imbued with but the faithful trace of tapping time
So subtle graze impart my thoughts in tender mime

While swaying pine implores to drink the pattered rain
Kept secretly, such conversations do ordain
Each endless hour filled with faith that you will know
A tip toe touch sent on the winds in carnal glow

Copyright Kkh 9/2/09

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2009-09-03 06:27 PM

Enjoyed this Diamond.

ARCTIC WIND

anniepimm54
Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 110

2 posted 2009-09-03 06:56 PM

This is lovely I enjoyed it very much,
Thank you for sharing

Annie

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2009-09-03 09:39 PM

Kathleen - just tip toe touch away. This is wonderful - I felt the mood and just relaxed into your words and atmosphere.

Alison

Innse Gall
New Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 8

4 posted 2009-09-04 03:07 PM

Stanza 1 drew me in immediately â€“ a moment captured in a verse. And I read on, and drew pleasure from your words. And the final couplet: such a fine end, such a pleasure to read.

Many Thanks,

Innse Gall

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

5 posted 2009-09-04 03:57 PM

really really enjoyed this

~Brad

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2009-09-05 06:06 AM

The beauty of your "Tip Toe Touch" gives me goosebumps, dear TD!

Exceptional and unique.

Love,
Margherita

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2009-09-11 06:12 PM

enjoyed this very much, my friend, especially liked the ending line...

j.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

8 posted 2009-09-14 11:53 AM

Lovely write, Diamond.
ida

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