Open Poetry #45 |
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Old Bones Turns Soft |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania ![]() |
Old Bones is; well; old. He no longer looks like the young Bones. He’s no longer “pretty”. He’s still thin, just a bag of Bones. However, the strong, rock hard six pack is a little soft and paunchy. If he tried to rent himself out, he’d get no takers. It’s good that Bones can do other things. Bobby |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, we all get soft eventually, except Jack LaLane! Have you seen him selling his juicer on TV? He looks great! Good thing we still have some other talents to share. ![]() Hug Bones gently so he doesn't break! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Kacy, For your kind words. I'm afraid I haven't noticed the juicer guy you talk about. I'll always hug Bones gently, we're inseparable. Love Bobby |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Benefits: Wisdom only comes with age. ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, I'd say that if Bones still has a six-pack ~ even if it is soft, that's still something to be proud of at his 'old' age! lol ![]() Linda |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
glad you're back ![]() and well |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
It's so good to hear about Bones again out here on the wind swept plains of Nebraska where very few people live. There is nothing in the Enquirer about him. It's good that you people in Philly keep up with his doings. But what of Joseph and Mary? Do they like the church? To quote Mr. Dickens in David Cooperfeild, "More please, sir." |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hey Bobby, I am so glad that you are back. I'll take Bones without his 6-pack and love him just the same. He's one heck of a guy and doesn't need to rent himself out anyway. There's not enough money to make it worth his time. xoxoxoxo Alison |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Artic Wind, Yes, wisdom does come with age. That's very true. Lobe Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Linda, Yes, the six pack is still there, although it's been in hiding for a number of years. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Shellie, Yes, I'm glad to be back, and I'm feeling great. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks GBride, Yes, Mary and Joseph love the church. It wouldn't matter if they didn't, they'd still have to go. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Alison, I'm very glad to be back. Bones doesn't need to rent himself out anymore. That a good thing. Love bobby |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Hi Bobby, it's great to be back but I was very dissappointed to see that you haven't been feeding Bones while I have been away. You had better pull your socks up old cobber and give him a decent feed. Lindsay |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo LindsayP, Thanks for your concern for the welfare of Bones. Bones is now very fortunate food-wise. He no longer walks around the hood, looking in windows, and watching other people eat--thank God for that. He no longer does garbage cans either. Bobby |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Yo Bobby, delightful read early morning... "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Prasad, I'm pleased that the poem worked for you. You're right, hard work does pay in the long run. No matter what kind of work it is. Bones always worked hard. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Glad to see you back, Bobby and old, soft Bones too. Missed you. Ida |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
we all turn soft |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A touch of fragility and softness makes us more human I guess. Good to know you are fine, dear Bobby. Bones will use his skills as a writer and Poet and share his wisdom too. And that's sure something to be proud of. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, I'm pleased to be back, and plan to stay a long time. I missed you follks too. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Helen, Yes, what you say is true. We all do turn soft as we get older--and that's a good thing. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, For your kind words. I plan on being around for a long time. Love Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bobby - good to see that you're posting again after the hospital stint. Poor Bones, getting old and soft is he... BC |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Bill, For reading and for your kind words. It's good to be back. Yes, Bones is getting old, and softening up I'm afraid. It happens to all of us. Hopefully he will feel all better soon. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Bobby, there is only one way, thanks for your thoughtful poem and your accuracy. yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, You have nailed the truth. It's all defiantly a narrow one way street, and making "U" turns are always against the law. I'm pleased that the poem worked for you. Bobby |
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rachaelfuchsberger![]()
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Dear, sweet Bobby, It IS good that Bones can do something else now. And it shows the good character that we all know he has. Arana Darkwolf |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Arana, For your kind words on Bones--Bones appreciates your words more than you can imagine. Love Bobby/Bones |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
'Bones' ... is the 'everyman' ... effective 'write' !! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Secondhanddreampoet, Indeed what you say is true. Bones is the "everyman". I've noticed that in myself. Bobby |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
My God! You must be proud with what 30 comments. Bones does have his friends though, doesn't he. You have built up quite a following. My character "Cain" is still in a Las Crusis bar trying to pick up a motorbike. I'll have him out soon though. |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
My God! You must be proud 31 comments. You have built up quite a following. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks GBride, For your kind words. I'm looking for your Cain. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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