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That You Would Hold Me
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That You Would Hold Me |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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That you would hold me Take my hand beside the stream See within my deepest grieving Turn it all into another dream More than friendship will discover What secrets our eyes have kept To still the hand that trembles Joy issues from where once was wept Voices soft in the sharing A minute without is far too long Taste the sweet heat of longing Given in to a bond that is strong No harm will come to you in this way Angel arms will comfort with a smile A warm breath on lips of love That was there all the while That you would hold me Heal all the torment I describe Smooth the aching waters Of the endless ocean inside |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Awwww that's lovely flows really well I really enjoyed reading this piece Thank you for sharing it  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
excellent |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~sigh~ this sounds so good to me : ) "Smooth the aching waters Of the endless ocean inside" ~love this |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
You ache in this plea for healiing, spilling it all over the page. H |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
if only, how beautiful would that be? Loved this. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you all....I am honored. |
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