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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2009-06-15 03:11 PM

like taking a stroll
in virtual words
wandering a line
in no hurry,
no apparent direction
following thoughts
roller-skating in "heards",
tripping lights fantastic
or dark's consuming flow,
wherever the thought may go
spirited free
and on going
threading between
dream fragments
future aspirations
and the dust of
everyday steps
along life's way
...rambles
giving chance,
dust to settle
amongst the cracks
preserving
before thinking
...again

"You don't have to go
You're the poetry man
You make things all rhyme" - P. Snow

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-06-15 06:14 PM

quote:
giving chance,
dust to settle
amongst the cracks
preserving
before thinking
...again

I loved this way of rambling ... which becomes quite clear when the "dust settles".

Great imagery.

Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2009-06-15 08:53 PM

"threading between
dream fragments
future aspirations
and the dust of
everyday steps"

Yep, that is life, Craig.
You just have to learn to embrace the dust.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2009-06-16 08:48 AM

threading between
dream fragments
future aspirations
and the dust of
everyday steps
along life's way
...rambles

my favorite...and how true...you really made me feel this...

well done!!!!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2009-06-16 08:57 AM

"You just have to learn to embrace the dust."

I love Kacy's response...

Enjoyed

M

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

5 posted 2009-06-16 11:02 AM

Really cool.

I was interested the entire time, didn't have to put any effort into finishing the poem.

Really cool.

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2009-06-16 01:55 PM

Lol, .... I find the dust these days a bit choking!!

I appreciate everyone's reply, this is the centerpiece to another book of mine that should be out in the Fall, appropriatly titled "Rambling Man". It will be full of rambles, some shared here and others from depths of my locked chest. If you would like to know when it is released just clear the dust of me and let me know,lol!!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

7 posted 2009-06-17 10:24 AM

"threading between
dream fragments"

...I just love this phrase...perhaps because that is where my mind has wandered to a lot lately...excellent write

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