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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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They mask the real, pocketing the once upons in a library of thought, embracing the hungry to better the dream. They ride the waves, the tide calling, captured by the spray of an understanding mist. Surrendering to the seeds of caring, they beach themselves in the shadows, living for the moment. Consumed by the dance, blinded by the setting sun they mirage their feelings though somewhere along the way, they are lost in the between. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh how lovely this write...very much enjoyed... |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
This is very true! Alot of people hide their feelings thinking that no one will know. I sure understand this one. Although, I am not one to hide my feelings, as a rule. Well, maybe I do it more now, than I use to. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful and profound, dear Maureen! Love, Margherita |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
People have to be real with themselves, then with one another, love has to be real in order for it to work, if not, it is all a sham...then you have wasted time on your hands. Thought provoking penning... ~ARH |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
So true, Maureen. Ida |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The beach theme is such a versatile analogy. I Love the way you wrote this, Maur~ And the message speaks volumes!!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen - as always you show your gift of writing... BC |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Enjoyed this, Poetess. Heather |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
"They ride the waves, the tide calling, captured by the spray of an understanding mist." now THAT is a most fine set of lines! applause for this interesting 'penning' ! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
just 'revisiting' this 'penning'! ... continuing applause !! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bruce, thank you again for "revisiting" my They. LeeJ, so good to see you posting again! Oklahoma Rose, it's not so much as hiding their feelings, Sue as it is the untruths told and even believed just to satify a need. Margherita, thank you. A Romantic Heart, real to some is a fantasy to others, especially on the internet. Sometmes love is just a game. One always hopes for the real, though. Ida, thank you. Lori, the beach always has a special meaning to me although I haven't had a chance to go back. I have a wedding to go to on the beach at Cape May on July 4th. I will be thinking about you. I hope life is treating you well. Bill, as always I appreciate you.  unboundpoetess, thank you for your response. Once again Bruce, I thank you. I was thinking about She and He and how it might end with They.  M |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
ok 1st off lady I know how to write been writing since I was 11 and 2nd there's nothing wrong with me posting to my own poem I post it to tell people what it's about and they write what they thought it was about I am a very talented writer and have gotten great reviews so apparently your suggesting to the wrong person Kate |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
voice2bheard, I have sent you an email... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent work M... welldone.. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
I enjoyed your post Maureen, Take care and have a lovely Christmas. Love. Lindsay |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
firstlinemindblowingholycrap. good write. paul Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
"captured by the spray of an understanding mist." Oh man, thats good. good writing. Zeitgeist |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I love when people say, "they say..." Good job here... much enjoyed reading you. |
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