Open Poetry #45 |
Lay With Me (lyrics) |
zaaclindsay Member
since 2009-08-12
Posts 111Ottawa Ontario |
Lyin’ here in magic; two shadows dancing on the walls. No one here to listen, to hear the rise and fall. Move with me in velvet into the afterglow. No one’s gonna’ find us, no one has to know. Lay with me. Won’t you just stay with me? Until the night is running from the east. Hold me close; promise you won’t let go. It’ll be alright… It’s alright … with me. Touch me like the ocean; like waves at eventide. I’ll kiss you like the sunset reaching for the sky. Let them moment smolder; like embers between our hearts. Come with me to Eden, It’s never very far. Lay with me. Won’t you just stay with me? Until the night is running from the east. Hold me close; promise you won’t let go It’ll be alright… It’s alright… with me. Pulses racing in the silence; we don’t have to say a word. Oh, the heat and flames’ still rising, so let the fire burn. Lay with me. Won’t you just stay with me? Until the night Is running from the east. Hold me close; I promiseI won’t let go. It’ll be alright… Yeah, it’s alright… with me. zaac is online now Report Post Send a new private message to zaac |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
~A Beautiful Love Song~ ~ARH |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Touch me like the ocean; like waves at eventide. I’ll kiss you like the sunset reaching for the sky." very much enjoyed this! |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
Favorite line: "Come with me to Eden, It’s never very far." This flowed quite well, and the beauty of this is that it's simutaneously a word picture and an invitation. Absolutely loved it, and look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dear fellow Canadian, what a loverly love song!!! I was hard-pressed to choose my favourite lines ~ of my favourite lines! lol "Touch me like the ocean; like waves at eventide. I’ll kiss you like the sunset reaching for the sky." ~ Sigggggghhhhhh Earth Angel |
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