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Silver Winged Angel (A Triolet)
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Silver Winged Angel (A Triolet) |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
Silver Winged Angel Silver winged angel with stars at your feet, ear drawn to your sound from the warming breeze. Beautiful face, shedding tears as you weep, saddened it seems for a world who's in need. A presence for soul's who are seeking peace, desperately you reach out to quell the din. Sparks from your wings show anger and despair, some you might find worth the saving, are rare. Searching for faces deprived of love and care, soft chiming angel looking for the spirits sin. Opening your wings to let them in, continuous is your whispering in the wind. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautifully done! I love this Silver Winged Angel! Love, Margherita |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
peaceseaker - well written, and a great read... BC |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
I thank you both so much for the lovely comments.....ps |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
A very beautiful poem! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ps, whisper-soft penning. I enjoy reading and writing about angels ~ for "Angels Are All Around Us".  Some of the things that angels witness, surely do sadden them. This divine piece of angelic writing is going to be tucked away.  Love & Angel Light, Linda   |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
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Davepth New Member
since 2009-03-30
Posts 8Venlo, Netherlands |
A nice read =) Always anjoy reading something with angels, be it positive or negative..they always have something special! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A very nice piece of writing but, so as not to confuse anyone, this isthe definition of a triolet.. A triolet (pronounced /ˈtraɪ.əlɨt/ or US: /ˌtriː.əˈleɪ/) is a one stanza poem of eight lines. Its rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB and often all lines are in iambic tetrameter: the first, fourth and seventh lines are identical, as are the second and final lines, thereby making the initial and final couplets identical as well. |
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