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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
I press the button and renew The page with someone's masterpiece. I see a so-called review Of letters less than letters missed. The comment's author claims to be A bard, a critic and a muse. This three-in-one, or none-in-three Can't get the core of someone's views, Of thoughts in their poetic flight. Yes, it is hard - they tend to flee, But it's the artist's one true might To see what other eyes can't see, And poets for a day or two, Who shape a random phrase by chance, Who haven't proved a sentence true, Just have no right to set demands For those who ponder, dare and speak, Who search, discover and create. Their fame is yet to reach its peak, And as for you, it's way too late. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
boy, if that isn't the truth and you've penned it well...it will never cease to amaze me the so called critics who think they know and see all in a person's feelings while they're writing...no one knows really, but the author... I always enjoy reading you Love Lee J. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~i agree, lee...no one knows what corner of the heart those words come from and the significance attached to phrases, words, and titles but the author. ~disaster...i really like your writing! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
sometimes we think we know someone who we don't even know, then come to find out they were were what they said they were. Very well written but a touch bitter in the end In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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