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Repost of what I think is my best... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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Passion's Flames A touch soft and tender A whisper filled with desire A gasp of sweet surrender As passion fuels the fire No words spoken between them No promises to be kept No lies being told tonight No looking back, no regret Longing to hold each other Such precious little time Both vowed to another Being lonely their only crime Tomorrow bringing sadness A brief moment of shame The memory of this one night A release from passion's flames - Jeffrey Carter |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Jeffrey - written with much emotion, I feel it when I read your words. Nice write... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, dear Jeffrey, this is a great write. Passionate, yet also delicate and very meaningful. Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
quite moving and full of passion...thanks for the poem. yann |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Both vowed to another Being lonely their only crime"... can relate Jeffrey, although sometimes it can lead to other "crimes"  Nicely done~~ M |
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