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Becoming Invisible
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Becoming Invisible |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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The appearance here is minimal Brief, for all it tries to be Pretending while becoming transparent Yet everyone still allowed to see The portrayal, while temporary, Is thus all the more adored And infinite in its grace Where each memory is stored Time and space does not exist Compared to the absolute One can’t buy what one cannot barter This, the eternal truth Gradually all things are lost And faded from mortal eyes Like water between the hands Like death even, when we die Pointless in the end of it all Making life less miserable I feel as if a rumor of a whole As I am becoming, invisible |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You express thoughts I had these days, so I can relate. Your visibility through this wonderful poem is greatly enjoyed here! Nothing fades within the embrace of Love. Love, Margherita  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
make your time special its your gift to design very thought provoking to this believer |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you Margherita for always reading me. Thanks inked...for letting me provoke your thoughts. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
CG I have to read this again tonight, but I am here reading. A |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Anytime Ali...anytime. Thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You, becoming "invisible"? ~ Au contraire, mon frere! The more I read your poetry, the more real you become. ~ Deep, multi-faceted ~ and talented, to be sure.  Love & Poet Llight, Linda  |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
All of us my friend are becoming invisible. Born visible and then become, in differing degrees, 'invisible'. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
CG, I did come back - twice. And I like this poem and have thought a lot about it. I don't have anything profound to share, other than I want to read it again. It's like thoughts are on the tip of my brain, but I can't express them yet. Again - I'll be back. A |
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