Open Poetry #45 |
sandfulls and god's eyes |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sometimes now I imagine the sounds of her like leaves left on water without wind how they move around like her hair when she laughed with her head tilted back and sometimes the ocean is still her eyes catching sun speckles in the green gazing perhaps a child holding glitter sandfulls and never letting any fall in the same place her perfume is too distant to be closeness but recognizable like a kiss left on the glass when drinking after a lover some years later and looking back at how they smiled back then I wonder if she still moves her foot around in that dangling sandal of conversation when the woman of her is elsewhere dancing possibly barefoot and on tiptoes taller too so she could be at ease, looking into gods eyes _____________ daark (do of sand) scribblenote: do (dough) is japanese for "way of"... [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-24-2009 11:59 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: To come back and find this gem makes me realize how I missed reading you. Moving and with your own touch of divine. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I knew if anyone could call Margherita back, it would be you. This is beautiful. My day has now begun. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..so pleased to see you back special one..thank you for the eyes ___________ ms ali-san, humble thanks little one, mancave hug gloves included. |
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Toccatta Junior Member
since 2009-07-08
Posts 26 |
This is an awesome write! I love how you describe things! Toccatta |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you make me want to rub myself with sandpaper and feel your tendertouch with it |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
sometimes now I imagine the sounds of her like leaves left on water without wind ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dayumm, D~ This really does it for me. Was at the beach yesterday and the water was so still, so perfect, and so hot! I found myself in a daydream, imagining all that! Love it when you write this way~ *Hug* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Toccatta..thanks so much ___________ ms inki...thanks you smoooooooooooth talker you.. ______________ ms bluezy..was that you? I was going to say something but you seemed busy...so...thanks babe |
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