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In Dark Times |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Come lay with me tonight, All night, under moonlight And twinkling starlight. We’ll watch through my window, From shadow, till tomorrow, Then there’ll be my sorrow When you fade into the way As my dreams slip away And you’re gone for the day. Gloom |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderfully melancholic, dear Professor. To share the night in this way is such a gift. Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Professor! You're back~ ~ professing your love for a nymph of the night! "Then there’ll be my sorrow When you fade into the way As my dreams slip away And you’re gone for the day" ~ Oh, but to return for another night. The mind is a powerful thing.   EA |
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Toccatta Junior Member
since 2009-07-08
Posts 26 |
Under the stars... the second part of this reminds me of how shoting stars fade away. Nice writing, but a little sad. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
It certainly has been a long time!  Enjoyed reading your work again! Jenn "Its gonna be alright cause I'm okay with me" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Don't you just hate when "dreams slip away" (I try to pocket them~~ at least for a day or two)  M |
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scorchedpen New Member
since 2009-08-26
Posts 5Norfolk, England |
simply magical ! |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you all for taking the time to read and respond. Gloom |
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