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Ellen in Midnight Blue.
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Ellen in Midnight Blue. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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Your skin must feel wondrous falling in drops, warm rain in may. You smile, forcing me to raise curtains, open windows let in the light. You sigh, and make me feel so very gentle, and much less giant. How I want to trace your outline with my charcoal hands. _______________________________________ I Do Everything Out Of Order, Ellen. (series) -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. [This message has been edited by viking_metal (06-17-2009 06:14 AM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
how do you do that?! you are such a romantic! and I so enjoy every single poem...  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Paul, Gentle is good. Keep up the good work. I like this poem a lot. Bobby |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
My dear SEA... Thanks. I guess I'm hopeless. I don't give poetry to girls anymore.  Robbus mah main man... Gentle is very good. Thanks for reading, man. I'm glad you like it. You don't say that often, so it means a lot. Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~SIGH~.... |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I'm not entirely sure what to do with that. Haha Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~sorry...that was not a bad ~sigh~ maybe i should have said that i am speechless |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Speechless, huh? I s'pose no news is good news Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~k...speechless in a good way!! i loved your poem, cutie : ) |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thank you, mademoiselle. (check your email) Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~already did...check yours |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
viking_metal - this is written with much tenderness, well done... BC |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Oh gosh, Gentle Giant~ This just blushes the prettiest shade of sigh. (give hubs some tips, wouldya) Ahh, Heather |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
BC... Thank you very much, sir. Unbound... That's the most poetic response I may have gotten yet. Thank you very much, ma'am, I just am what I am. Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Beautiful, Paul. A |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thank you allaboo. -P Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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