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peaceseaker
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since 2009-07-29

Posts 161

0 posted 2009-08-23 03:55 PM

Love Long Ago

My hand starts; seeing your face
as I write lyrics of love;
reflecting on your beauty,
taking my breath away.

A face etched finely and framed;
cascading locks of hair.
Skin so fair and soft as silk,
as I fondly remember oh so well.

I think of the music box
crafted when love was new.
No drawing curtains on us,
our play was absolute.

Love, as true and staying
as the stars are for wishing.
Desirous was our touch;
nights of firefly lightning.

Golden days so long ago,
timeless music of words.
With fragile parchment and quill;
a love never let go.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2009-08-23 04:04 PM

Hi, ps!

Poem and pic complement each other perfectly. This post is a work of art!

EA

peaceseaker
Member

since 2009-07-29

Posts 161

2 posted 2009-08-23 04:09 PM

That was quick...thank you so much for the very nice compliment EA....much appreciated....huggs, ps

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2009-08-23 08:31 PM

Enjoyed the write.

ARCTIC WIND

peaceseaker
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since 2009-07-29

Posts 161

4 posted 2009-08-24 06:59 AM

Thank you so much Artic..glad you enjoyed...ps

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2009-08-26 07:30 PM

Wonderful...James

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2009-08-27 12:08 PM

quote:
our play was absolute

A most exquisite write, dear peaceseeker, and the above line says it all so beautifully.

Love,
Margherita

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2009-08-27 12:47 PM

very lovely words, soft flow, romantic,enjoyed!

~ARH

peaceseaker
Member

since 2009-07-29

Posts 161

8 posted 2009-08-27 07:12 AM

Thanking the 3 of you, so much for reading and commenting...glad you enjoyed..ps

jbstillwater
Member

since 2009-07-03

Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico

9 posted 2009-08-27 01:52 PM

Just beautiful, my friend...each line a pure treat and nostalgic as only you can do!

Jan

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