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August mist
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August mist |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway 
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 All is still, this strange hushed morn No song of birds, no traffic horn For mist has claimed the earth today Enshrouding all in softest grey Concealing shape and muffling sound Transforming, changing all around Weaving spells of black and white Disguising each familiar sight Revealing now an eerie grace A delicate shawl of silver lace Until at last, as day wears on I look, and find the mist has gone When waving leafy trees appear Out of the magic atmosphere I briefly mourn the ghostly hand That made the world a spellbound land |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Heart...Such a smooth calming flow to your words. Enjoyed very much...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Gorgeous. This might be my favorite of yours. Alison |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
Oh Kat,..your pen is always awesome..and the words just flow so easily for the reader...I loved the line... " A delicate shawl of silver lace" Thank you for sharing....ps |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
This morning's August mist was a perfect background for your words~~ M |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
Amazing! Your abilities in meter, imagery and eloquence, are stunning. I look forward to more.  Rileigh |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Absolutely beautiful Heart2Heart. Both, the picture and the poem. You have become one of my favorite poets. |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thanks everybody. We had one of those hazy days of August yesterday morning. And after a few hours the mist cleared away and it turned out to be one of those brilliant blue and clear late and mellow summer days The mist drifts in from the sea where I live, but very often it vanishes after an hour or two in the mornings.Heart2Heart |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
"The mist from the smoke of a distant fire" a fire in the heart, lovely, Bloodline |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A spellbinding write about a "spellbound land". Thoroughly enjoyed, dear Katriona. Your writing is sheer poetry!  Love and hugs, Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your beautiful poetry paints your "magick land" with love, Heart2heart. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Are the photographs you use yours too? They are always beautiful. A |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thanks all for your sweet replies. Alison I find most of my pictures on flickr.com, my daughter is member there and has taken many of the photographs I use. She's a fantastic photographer. Heart2Heart |
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