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The rubies of evening
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The rubies of evening |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway 
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 See the sunset deep and peaceful Stealing o'er the weary day While the passing silver cloudlets Homeward drift upon their way See the little woodland flowers Under twilight's drowsy spell When every ancient moss grown bower An old bewitching tale can tell See the waves in rhythm flowing Lapping in the wind's caress While the slumb'ring trees keep vigil In evenings's splendid ruby dress See the gentle willows swaying Branches rustling to and fro As the waves against the molo Ceaseless dance in wondrous flow Soon these marvels of creation Closing down for nightfall's rest Gather strength for morning's promise Nature at her radiant best |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh this is beautiful!! I read, I saw, I smiled.. thank you  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thank you Roniece. A pity the image disappeared, it is one of the most wonderful sunsets I have ever seen. The picture was taken on July 4th and submitted by a good friend of mine who stays in Maine to a weekly photography competition and I wrote the poem as a thank you and praise of his beautiful capture. Heart2Heart |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
See the waves in rhythm flowing Lapping in the wind's caress While the slumb'ring trees keep vigil In evenings's splendid ruby dress _____________________ it's why I read you shel . |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Heart2Heart - it's beautiful to see an early morning with nature coming to life... BC |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello katriona Nature at her radiant best and all the poem flows gently and beautifully, thanks for the poem. yann |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I loved the poem so much, that I was doubly disappointed that the image did not show up! So, I looked at your link and discovered that you had added an s to the http! Now you can post the pic and all will be happy!  Love to you, dear Katriona! Linda  |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thanks Shellie, appreciate you reading this. Heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thanks ever so much for leaving your kind words Bill Heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
My pleasure Yann, thank you ! Katriona |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Oh thank you so much Linda, I would never have been able to find out what I had done wrong, that little "s" must have sneaked in there somehow while I was posting the picture. And thanks also for your always kind and cheerful words Love Katriona |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
Oh my, well I'm just awe struck and truly speechless...this was absolutely one of your best I think Kat...huggs, ps |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thank you so much Janet, I'm so happy to see you here in this very nice place Katriona |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Rubies? Hummmmm, reminds me of a welcome month and moon, lovely, Bloodline |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
amazing work m'dear Lana |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Breathtaking beauty, dear Katriona, in picture and words. I am so happy I found this glorious piece from you. Love, Margherita |
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Toccatta Junior Member
since 2009-07-08
Posts 26 |
Such a calm beauty is portrayed in the evening rubies. Toccatta |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
You came, you saw, you conquered! (lol) with this one, ma luv.....I do not think I have read this one before, Katriona...a pure jou to come home and find such a lovely piece! Huggs Jan |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Heart2Heart...Really felt a peaceful feeling while reading this wonderful poem. Enjoyed very much...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Writ_Upon_Emotion Junior Member
since 2009-08-26
Posts 13Manchester, England |
A picture WRITES a thousand words. |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thanks so much to every single one of you dear friends. My words can never match the overwhelming beauty of Mother Nature Heart2Heart |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh, yes, I see. I do see and thank you for sharing the beauty. Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful picture, even more beautiful poem. Ida |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thank you so much Alison and Ida for stopping by Katriona |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the way you color your poetry while sharing your little corner of the world with us. ....Radiant, Indeed!!! Thank you for your special gifts~ |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thanks Blues Heart2Heart |
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