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Come, Then {Inspired by BeLLe}
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Come, Then {Inspired by BeLLe} |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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 Come, then dreams of yesterday where scenes seen unfold like a mystery yet unsolved, unresolved moments of time that flit on wings passing by as wishes on wind, spin caught up in a whirlwind of magical nights and mystical days passing by in a haze of slow motioned emotions filling; this cobalt night stilling, heartbeats blending as one until then, come thread loosely these tender dreams as I suffer willingly this haunting that wraps itself inside of me lingering, these whisperings of what was then shall someday be, once again. © dmsmith {Upon reading Mari's Book "The Fairytale Journals"} |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
A sweet enchantment captured in color and song, Bloodline |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bloodline, thanks so much for taking the time and peeking in on this one. ~D |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
YES! This is gorgeous, Donna. You were definitely inspired. Hmm, Mari's book....I haven't read it...boo hoo hoo, when you have a chance please send me the info how to get it, ok? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kacy, thank you hon. It was not so much what she wrote, as how she wrote. Either way, she is a true talent. I have sent you the info you requested. Hugs sweet lady. ~D |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
lingering, these whisperings of what was then shall someday be, once again. And it is for hope of that someday that we breathe. *S* So very lovely... and it's great to see you posting, dear lady! *S* |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Donna, I have missed you so ding-dang much. What a great surprise to see you here, among us. Please don't be gone for so long next time. Now for your poem - it is pure beauty. But these three lines captured me. I think they are going to be kept in my wallet. I love them, feel them and live them - breathe them. quote: Thank you, dear friend. Alison |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sweet friends, thank you each for the warm welcome back, and for taking the time to stop in and peek at my offering. I just can't help myself from coming in and visiting time and time again.... It is always nice to roam these halls of blue.  hugs n peace to poetry land ~D |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
thread loosely these tender dreams ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is gorgeous and that thought up there is exquisite!!! I'm happy you're home!! hug~ |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
thread loosely these tender dreams as I suffer willingly this haunting that wraps itself inside of me ~love this! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
((Bluesy)) You touch my heart gal... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thank you for your reply brneyedgrly, and for your time here. |
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