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the dance, a cappella
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the dance, a cappella |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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She was runaway blonde he was mentor and sideshow they romped in his dungeon looped on vodka and poetry finding thrills in his toychest he was glitter on gutter in dynamic dysfunction a whitewash of color insanity's brilliance with the loins of a seaman he flooded her ocean she induldged his desire tallying seasons they entwined in his mirror in the mimic of oaktree that mimed in his window barefoot and twisted they danced a cappella [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-21-2009 07:39 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
never been blonde but can recall such a feeling~~  M |
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Lone_Wolf84 Junior Member
since 2009-05-26
Posts 21 |
That is pretty vivid  I would have loved to read a longer version of it. your words are subtle but yet so brutal. They convey the dream but it needs a climax. The...ice polars that melt, know what I mean? |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Great write, I'm a fan |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Only you, good goddess!! Very cool poem!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and ink too...what can I say lady!! |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Brilliant. And brilliantly white hot heat. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Awesome.... j. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Awesome.... j. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hmmm, methinks that goddesses have more fun than 'angels'!  lolTotally enjoyed this! What a writer!  Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
In the mirror of your light there is much delight |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
can see this as more of a tango, it has that flare and justification to it ... ... both with roses in their mouths! Ct |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I remember a feeling such as this. It was a great feeling to have. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - h'mmmmm, I like it... BC |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for dancing by |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
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