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Bittersweet destiny |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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 Dear Romeo, If your life has been in vain so has mine I, at my balcony listening to the bittersweet sound of the nightingale Praying that it was your voice singing in my ears I await the day you stand beneath my balcony professing your sweet love Sorrow echos with each passing day I stare at the moon yearning to see it's twilight in the ocean of your eyes Are we destined to be star crossed lovers doomed to roam this earth without one another O, my heart breaks For never was a story of more woe Than that of your fair Juliet and that of you, my sweet Romeo Yours in this life and in death, Juliet The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
awww...I teach Romeo and Juliet every spring and I never get tired of the story. My favorite line: "I stare at the moon yearning to see it's twilight in the ocean of your eyes"--simply beautiful. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Such a woman, your Juliet... and a beautiful pictograph to allow the senses to meld. Good job, Kris! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice write and presentation of yearning. Hope your personal Romeo shows up soon and sweeps you off that balcony on a full moon night with twinkling cascading starlight surrounding both of you! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
enjoyed the words about love. yann |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wow, Kris! Love this style on you! So romantic, impassioned, and poetic! You would make any Romeo proud to have you as his Juliet! Two thumbs up for this entire post!!!  Loveya! Linda |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Kris ~ this is beautiful and I love your new picture too. Lovely, darlin'. xoxoxo A |
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