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Yellow Window
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan 
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Yellow Window I rub my eyes And sigh so deep This bare light bulb casts Ugly shadows The floor is cold On bare feet The past sits naked In the corner crying. In this cell of Society, In a forgotten basement The clock repeats over and over Just how lonely I am. Feet walk by the yellow window Sunshine, filtered by the stains. I hug my knees And bang my head in a dream Without an end. My hair, matted with dust Teeth, hurt and rot. My heart, struggles to remember Why it needs to beat. Inside my eyes, Your smile, Holding me and saving my life. |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
"My heart, struggles to remember Why it needs to beat." I love it. Those lines relate to so many people. Rileigh |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Words well spoken so very true I pray your windows change colors hue from yellow cowards to shades of blue may all perfect perceptive views |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Such a beautiful and poignant wriie, Yoinn. Soul touching. Ida |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thank you again Rileigh. Thats the wish for all my writings is to have people relate to them. Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thanks Brad for the cool reply. Your buddy Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
If I touched your soul Ida, Im sure I pulled back a handfull of beauty  Yoin |
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