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Inner Fire |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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I want to be the wind That comes to you across the plains To be the ocean boundless As I swallow your rain Arms outstretched With head back, I look to the sky Let the drops fall on my face To drown what I feel inside I am to be the youth in you Feel me, I am all that you desire If life is but a short journey Then for now, I will be your inner fire |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful! Love always rejuvenates. Love your imagery. Love, Margherita |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
That first stanza is one of the most mindblowing things I've ever read. Beyond impressed with this write. -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. [This message has been edited by Denise (06-15-2009 06:26 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
What a beautiful journey through your words here CG, and so very enjoyed too. Lovely |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile... sparking up the ole kundalini?  Actually, I agree, that first verse is breathtaking! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Out west, you'd be a Santa Ana wind...super hot.  Seriously, I have to agree that first stanza is awesome! |
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