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Do you Remember?
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Do you Remember? |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA 
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Do you remember? Do you remember the first time we met? The minute I caught your eye, I couldn’t believe what I saw, That was my lucky day. Do you remember the first time we talked? Something stirred within me, When I asked you for a favor, Your smile took my breath away. Do you remember the first time we touched? How your hand felt in mine, And how you held me when we danced, I was forever lost in you. Do you remember the first time we kissed? Your lips told me more than your words, With the excitement of the moment, I knew no other would do. Do you remember falling in love? How we cried at the feelings we shared, We wanted so badly to be together, And make this dream come to life, Do you remember the first time we made love? That most wonderful day that we wed, The joy and happiness I had been looking for, You gave me by becoming my wife. The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I bet she hasn't forgotten! But, too often those times never last. Still, those memories are always there. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tracey, there be not a woman on the face of this earth who would not be swooning if she were to receive a poem of remembrance and adore such as this, from her husband. This would make a perfect anniversary poem! (Is is?)  You are both blessed to have found each other and may you remain together forever and a day and as happy as this poem so lovingly illustrates. God bless you both!   Linda |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
You know, we just don't see enough of these type of poems. Husband and wife and the love between them, what better fuel for a poem. Good job Tracey. Yoin |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Tracey, Beautiful writing. It flows and carried me with each memory that you shared. Thank you. Alison |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
WTBAKELAR - soft hearted write, very nice... BC |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Dear Tracey: This is the first time I have read this poem. It is wonderful. Lucky Shellie, bless you both. I havent set down to my computer for almost a month, can't find the time. Just got back from Wyoming. Talk to you later. MOM |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What beautiful memories you've woven into this stunning poem! *S* So lovely... and so loving! *S* |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
I am so embarrased that I missed thanking each and every one of you for your most kind comments on this poem, SO, Thank you all so very much for taking the time to read and leave your thoughts and fealings for my work You all mean the world to me and I appreciate your kindness. Love always, Tracey |
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