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This Tremble
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This Tremble |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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…this tremble whispered thoughts of a common breeze flowing driplets to bead creeking streams growing …this tremble subtle awakenings air beneath wing lifting current events and life’s tides shifting beginnings and ends …this tremble now rooted deft and sound tried and bound revealed in full flight making ground from being found unsealed …this tremble whispered subtle now flowing, lifting, revealed …this tremble streams tides found "You don't have to go |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is such a beautiful read on the buoyant, yet meditative, flowing arteries of nature and vitality, dearest Craig! I believe a coupled tension and repose make life's most beautiful music, in that the former makes the blood effervesce and the latter helps relax it, which both are what help breathe oxygen into our life blood! Bless you, my friend, this was a most enjoyable read!  Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
subtle awakenings air beneath wing lifting current events and life’s tides shifting beginnings and ends …this tremble __________________________ : ) . flesh, blood, bone, love...twisted |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the push and pull, and ultimate crescendo. Beautiful work, ct~ |
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