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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-08-11 07:16 PM

Lady by the Lake

Its two hours on horseback
from Cottonwood Manor
to Serenity Lake,
but when a mans heart
turns his thoughts
towards his sweetheart
time seems to pass faster
for a horse and
his eager Master.
Over yonder,
on the other side
of that hill
at the end of
the Lakeview Meadow
lives an especially
sensual lady.
For this reason I ride
towards the lake,
to arrive before the
setting of the sun
so while it
kisses the horizon
I shall be in my
sweet lovers embrace.
Thereafter we will take in
the warm glow of a full moon
reflecting upon a serene lake,
enticing us to go farther
with each subsequent
kiss we take.

JamesLee
09August
2009

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2009-08-11 08:03 PM

Have you ever thought of writing a Harlequin Romance novel? This was dreamy.

Linda

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2009-08-11 08:35 PM

ah James.. you romantic you!! enjoyed this so very much lovely boy!

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2009-08-11 08:40 PM

Yo James,

This is a lovely love poem.

Bobby

peaceseaker
Member

since 2009-07-29

Posts 161

4 posted 2009-08-12 08:26 AM

WoW! this was wonderful...very nice imagery and format...reminded me of some of my favorite movies whether this makes any sense or not...."Man in the Iron Mask" "Moulan Ruge" "Robin Hood" I don't know but something like that..the Shakespearan era? Anyway, truly enjoyed this read....peaceseaker

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2009-08-13 04:56 PM

simple, fine Romanticism!

applause !!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2009-08-13 05:25 PM

JamesMichael - ah James, a kiss in the moonlight, love it...

BC

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

7 posted 2009-08-13 05:49 PM

The passion here was portrayed perfectly. Great job James.

Yoin

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2009-08-13 07:43 PM

JamesM, I think I have found a favorite of yours in this one~~

M

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2009-08-14 06:21 PM

Thank you Earth Angel, Roniece, Robert, peacemaker, secondhanddreampoet, Bill, Yonin and nakdthoughts for the wonderful responses...James

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