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The Clown . . . (Rispetto)
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The Clown . . . (Rispetto) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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 The Clown by Linda L. Dowd It’s sad to see a laughing clown. Who’s smiling with unhappy eyes. There is a face that wears a frown, Behind the paint and clown disguise. He wears his heart upon his sleeve, And lives in world of make-believe. His smiling face belies his woe. But life goes on and so must show. . |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
I loved this poem! So sad... Written very well. The only thing I can see wrong (and I promise you, I don't pretend to know much about form) is the rhyme scheme.... I thought it was supposed to be abab ccdd, but I'm probably mistaken. Anyway, Fantastic poem, and the picture goes really well Rileigh |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
CC ~ You're absolutely correct! I have now remedied it! Thank you for pointing that out to me! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.   EA |
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RainbowQueen Junior Member
since 2009-08-12
Posts 10WA., USA |
Your pic simply brought life to your verse...well done  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, RainbowQueen! Love your name! Yes, that pic is perfect! I had used it on another poem some time ago, and after writing this one I thouoght it would work well! I'm pleased that you think so too!  I wish I knew the name of the artist so that I could give him/her their due credit. Nice to meet you! EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-12-2009 03:15 PM).] |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Hugs to the Clown !! And hugs to you We all are like the clown at times. And we all must go on with the show, but God is there to change that frown into a smile ! xoxo, Tink The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
well done indeed! applause!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Linda - a clown to smile yet hide his sadness. A most telling write... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Tinker Bell! One can fake a smile with their lips, but it is their eyes that tell the story. I suppose that we have all put a haapy face on in the attempt to hide the sadness within. However, those who take the time to look in their eyes will see the pain and sorrow. Thank you for the warm, thought-filled reply.  Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
shdp ~ Good morning, Bard Bruce! As a clown at times, I appreciate your applause! Enjoy your day! The circus has come to town! lol Llinda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC ~ Have we not all done that at one time or another. ~ Usually to spare the feelings of others. However, those who care enough to look beyond the facade and into our eyes, see the anguish that lies within. Giving you a genuine smile with twinkling eyes, Linda  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Earth Angel, I enjoyed your poem and responses a lot, but then again, I always do! I can see those genuine, twinkling eyes smiling! Oh, I just luv you and your writing! You understand so much of the world! misce' |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
LOVE CLOWN's LOVED THIS! Very well done my friend...huggs, ps |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
ummm...  I've always been afraid of clowns... but I love your rispetto and you! ss shel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
misce' ~ Well, bless your sweet soul! You just added some more twinkle to these baby blues! Guess what?!! ~ " I just luv you and your writing! You understand so much of the world!" Mwwaaaahhhh! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
peaceseaker ~ Greetings, ps! I'm tickled pink that you dig my clown poem! A big smiley face, and a :hug: EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Brown-eyed beauty ~ When I was a little 'cherub', clowns used to frighten me as well! I would cry and hang onto my my Mom's skirt whenever I would see one! Go figure, I never liked potato chips, either! Aren't kids supposed to like clowns and potato chips?!? lol  Love you, Girly! Your sss, Linda Lou |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (huggies) That last line was truly haunting, especially in that it can often take a while for some particular intuitive, sensitive person to see behind the thick make-up, and it truly fascinates me how some are willing to give and sacrifice so much just to see to it the big tent doesn't flap down! (sigh) May love come and set all these jokers free! This was a most compassionate write, thanks sooooooooo much! XOXO, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ ~ and yours was a most "compassionate" reply! Like yourself, I try to see behind the masks that most people wear. I have discovered many wonderful things that I otherwise would not have found if I had not taken the time to really look..and then there have been some things that I would have preferred not have discovered! lol  Much love to you, my angelic friend, Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I was at a fair today in the rain and a clown came to walk with me under my umbrella. I tried to cheer him up but he never smiled. Was very sad |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The clown was likely attracted to your Light (among other things ). Thanks for sharing that 'Kodak Moment'. Linda |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Lindy Lou, The different ways you write poetry just shows your ability to create a masterpiece in nearly everything you write. I just loved the post about the clown, it was a delight to read. loved it and you. Lindsay |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Many years ago a sister of mine did a look alike paint by number painting like this that I remember very well..And the clown was sad then too..funny I just picked a book called Water for Elephants with a pensive clown on the cover..much enjoyed the read Martin Dansky |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lindsay ~ My dear, dear Aussie Man, you add more blush to my cheeks than does my compact of rouge! Love you 2, Lindy Lou xo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ecrivan ~ Martin the Wizard Writer is back! It's been a while, my fellow Canadian! Thanks for dropping by and sharing your little anecdotes with me! Linda |
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