Open Poetry #45 |
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A New Love |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
A New Love Like music to my soul & colors not yet seen, gently washing over me, lapping at my every need. Joy unexpected, a gift of anticipation, brightly wrapped Dreams not yet tapped, faintly calling "wait and see," what yet might be. Beautiful eye's filling me up, an empty cup; beckoning light in the deepest night, waves on the sand, whispering her name |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
this is a beautiful little love poem ![]() . flesh, blood, bone, love...twisted |
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Dreamer05 Junior Member
since 2009-06-23
Posts 30Kansas |
Nicely done! You give some good visuals. Keep up the good work! ~Dreamer05~ |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
The softness of light in this-- eyes, nature, love--add to the anticipation of joy and romance. I like it very much! ~KL |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh, yes. I like this one too. Alison |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
Your comments flatter a poet so much...I thank you for reading, taking the time to comment...glad you enjoyed this one....ps |
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