Open Poetry #45 |
Tokaido |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. After All these years Look at all Those dead gods Along the road Well bring Some dogs And buns While you can Old friend With all this Beautiful wood Given the right attitude It should make A good fire . |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Right you are! Loved this impactful, thought provoker! ·´~`·»Brett«·´~`· |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
splendid. yann |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Oh I do like this John. I too have many dead gods along my path. As we age wisdom gathered from our experience allows us to cast aside that what we once revered for that is the true essence of maturing. A slow pealing away to find our truth. Did I say I loved this poem.. great work. Yoin |
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