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dear mother..(a tanka)
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dear mother..(a tanka) |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada 
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dear mother, I should ask the moon to take me too we can praise the rose gardens and rain down protective beams together **** **** ..circa 2009.Copyright 2009 Spiros Zafiris ..channeled; spirit Harmony |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
Short, but carries immense meaning. Super write. Rileigh |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Like a diamond. ·´~`·»Brett«·´~`· |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
...perhaps roses are bathed velvet in moonlight; this feels especially serene and tender. I love the first line, as if the moon is a special haven of mothers, calm and coolly nurturing. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Good things come in small packages, but in this case, great things came in a small package! a brilliant write, and a pleasure to read! A keeper! `miscellanea~ |
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Callista Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 63USA |
Simple and sweet. It shimmers. Cal |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..thank you dear people.. ..your kind words are an inspiration.. spiros |
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