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the world changes every minute |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
The world changes every minute, new faces in the street,new roses at dawn lose its colors and the sun making innocent circles in my heart, what I think during a day, I will not think the next morning. The world changes like second hands of a clock, never there, never here, like trains always in move, thoughts in a hurry, deep melancholies strayed by moon, World changes every minute and shivers, it works for me as a love song,never there, never here, hungry colours in your hands, world changes the world. [This message has been edited by 2islander2 (08-09-2009 04:08 AM).] |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I thought this was a beautifully simple expression with some excellent lines. ·´~`·»Brett«·´~`· |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Yann, What this poem says is true. It's sometimes all a blur. Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Yann the Man! ~ And how are you today? ~ Certainly different from the way you were yesterday and different from the way you will be tomorrow! lol  ~ But hopefully your beautiful essence will remain as beautiful tomorrow as it is today! The only constant in our lives is change!    Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-08-2009 09:53 PM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I see you are deep in thought, yann, and writing it down for us. Thank you for sharing your wisdom. Ida |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
I like this. Movement keeps the moss from growing. good write. Yoin |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very interesting post Yann, and I think you are not far off the mark, but some times the changes are not for the better, but there again it is better to see the glass as half full and not as half empty Lindsay |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Yes it does for good or bad, and for me being a melancholic person at heart, I tend to linger with the sentimental sides of life, not so good says my kids to me, but what can you do if you are born like that, hehe  A poem to ponder over, beautifully written as always dear Yann. I have to commend you for another aspect here, your English, if it is indeed not your mother language ? If not, I am so impressed ! You know perhaps my mother company is French, and nobody there, and I mean nobody, has such excellent (and melodious) command of the English language as you constantly display. You have perhaps stayed or worked in the US or Britain ? Forgive my curiosity, you don't have to answer of course Katriona |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Brett I appreciate your words. best wishes. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Yes indeed Bobby, thanks for reading and leaving a message. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello dear Linda, I really believe you are an earth angel, thanks for the graceful comment. best wishes. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Ida, I had deep thoughts the last 3 or 4 days, never good to keep it...Fortunately I change too...Thanks for the helpful comment. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks yoin for the metaphoric comment, I guess mind is like a garden and we have to keep weeds off. Thanks again. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks lindsay, we have to be be humble as you mean, changing can be bad too...Thanks for the relevant comment. best wishes yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Dear Katriona, your question makes me happy, If you could hear me, you would run away, my french accent is lousy, all I do is to write and I guess it is easier, I stayed while travelling 120 days in Usa and made 8 or 10 weeks in england so I am a bit familiar with english...Since these travels I read english books which is very good to assimilate the language..I must confess that I learn a lot on the PIP site reading talented poets and commenting their works...I don't know how but it works...Thanks again for the delicious comment. yann |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
yann, I think your efforts at learing English are showing in your poems. I have always enjoyed your poetry, but now - it is amazing. I think we are seeing more of the real yann as you are able to express yourself with more confidence. You are taking us deeper into your thoughts - and expressing them so beautifully. Thank you for allowing me to go on this journey with you. Your friend, Alison |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...sometimes ssid at my job, "the job changes every 5 minutes"...James |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
The world changes every minute, new faces in the street,new roses at dawn lose its colors and the sun making innocent circles in my heart, _____________________________________ yanno Did I tell you how much I enjoy your writing? Well....I do, very much! shellie . |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
dear Yann.. I simply love this! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Alison for the so kind comment, read it with attention and your words touched me...enjoyed the journey you made. have a great day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
James, your comment touch me, a ever changing word can be sure interesting but perhaps exhausting, but it has avantages surely. best wishes yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks shellie for the kind comment, I warmly appreciate it. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Roniece for the exquisite comment. have a nice day yann |
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