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hounds & freckle glue |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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something about that baskin robbins moon a tennis ball of single scoop vanilla in a tub of dirty blue jean sky never washed em before kind with dog hair friendly all over like when we were kids kind of memories got the warm all over us, like syrup and we could feel our freckles under the night glow colors like heaven glued them there old hound highways were soft licorice bare footin' left a few tracks but didn't burn your toes and you could walk with your eyes closed it don't matter in which direction since love was in the middle and on both ends ______________ daark |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awww...  I love this! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Suesea. Thanks babe |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The "newness" and memories go hand in hand don't they.....and you write them so nice, DS~ Love this little gem!! |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
just needed to smile over this one again |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
D Didn't anyone tell you you dripped some sweet on yer sleeve L, H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy, thank you babe!! ___________ thanks suesea.. ________________ ms ubp...dammit I hate getting into the sticky that way..takes hours to get it all wiggled off again..thanks lady |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D I particulary love "dog hair friendly" - nothing like dog hair, a favorite pair of blue jeans and a goofy laugh to set one apart. This is another good one - how come they are all so good? A |
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pretty1 Junior Member
since 2009-03-13
Posts 22 |
and you could walk with your eyes closed it don't matter in which direction since love was in the middle and on both ends This is so true - that time in one's life when there are no worries just love to surround you! This is wonderful. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: It's almost dawn now and I am happy I went diving early for pearls ... and finding this one which sparkles with poetic radiance. Awesome, dear D.! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe ___________ ms pretty1, thank you lady friend _____________ ms mar, thanks special lady |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
love your imagery.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
luminosity friend...thank you |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
Once again, thank you. You beautifully weave truth and beauty, with a hint of intrigue. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thank you KS for the read and comments |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
The blending of the past and present was so subtle that didnt even realise when one finished and the other started .Keep coming up with these so that we can learn. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you friend esha |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed this write. ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks AW... |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
That last line was a killer! Wow. Did not know where you were going at first but knew if I continued to the next line, and the next, it would build and enlighten and so it did! Warm fuzzies with this one Jan |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms jb...thanks lady ________ thanks van |
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