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Evening (Haiku)
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Evening (Haiku) |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Evening Heavenly, cool breeze like the brush of angel wings after heat of day. Ida Werrett |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Awww! This is sweet! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
It's been so hot here this summer - I can truly understand. I long for rain. Hugs to you, Ida. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Ida, this is perfect! I love it very much and can feel it too! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Beautiful, just beautiful Ida Heart2Heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Redemption after the sizzle of an August day. Enjoyed this. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
We need some of that cool breeze here. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a light 'write' most fine! much applause for this 'penning' !! |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
Evening Heavenly, cool breeze like the brush of angel wings after heat of day. . Ida I'm tucking this breath of fresh angel air in my pocket for these hot days in Illinois love it! shellie |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
perfect tone Ida, subtle images refreshing poem. yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all for your comments. I am waiting for evening now because it is HOT today. Ida |
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