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Open Poetry #45

find a better way of seeing your eyes forever glued to mine

freeze us both in time@
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since 2009-06-14

Posts 16

0 posted 2009-06-14 02:04 AM

The mind an empty cavity to be hacked at

to be probed

to be rearranged by the enemy

to be stolen to be known

I wait for the deafening silence and in time we all shall fade

I will keep this synthetic flake of you

Forget the promise that you made

Surrender to the unedifying shadows

He waits for night to come

He clings to his last memory…it was nothing to no one

Love the sheltered feeling cherish it you belong

Feel that strong desire and sing your final song

The mind an empty cavity to be broken and explored

The enemy makes his own

The body now ignored

[This message has been edited by freeze us both in time@ (06-14-2009 03:52 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-06-14 09:01 AM

A bit cynical, yet very well written.

Love,
Margherita

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