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Open Poetry #45

Crossroads of Humanity

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-08-05 11:26 AM

Alone she lives, yet not alone
In the middle of nowhere she makes her home
Possessed of all traits of beauty uncommon
It takes a stranger’s eyes to find them
Someone who fills the cup complete
That is always no small feat
She lives to shout out from the roof
The time is near, she is given proof
All she has to do to take to the wind
Is summon all there is of strength within
And listen to the forces and powers that be
Reclaiming all that was lost of her humanity

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-08-06 04:20 AM

Impressive work, dear J.!

Love,
Margherita

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

2 posted 2009-08-06 05:28 AM

Loved this dear J., especially the first two lines are beautifully written, all with a touch of sadness. Your rhymes are truly lovely in this poem.
Katriona

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