Open Poetry #45 |
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The Dog Days of Summer |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California ![]() |
The delta breeze chimes in the pallid air, almost making music from the willing sunflowers. Almost slipping beneath the double pane glass of my inconsiderate mood. It moves the tall grass beside a warm pond where fish ignore ripples with their lethargic large mouths closed. In this room of bones and chairs an airplane and refrigerator hum along and the dog snores in her old comforting warmth, as a trickle of thought from the corrugated roof of my mind, weeps. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Incredible imagery, as always. You are always one of my favorites. ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Martie, what a treat! You are awesome! Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amazing, isn't it, how our climes close in; and give Precious my hugs... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
just loved ... and the dog snores... so perfect a fit.... Cool write my friend... j. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
These words simply taste delicious on the tongue. Beautiful. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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