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Open Poetry #45

The Uni-Verse Within The Universe Outside

D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2009-08-03 01:38 PM

The Uni-Verse Within The Universe Outside

Oh, HeArt Beats spring on creative wings of Artmosphere
Dancing within the soul’s Uni-Verse of fairy tale creations.
Barefoot minds sailing fancy free among dream spheres
Fountain of word’s worth enchanted youth’s spell of elation.

Oh, heartbeats walk with conforming minds of atmosphere
Walking outside the body’s Universe of reality story frustration.
Tight toe shoe constraints pressing condition into meteor storm
Mountain of word challenges weathers wrinkling age desperation.

Vacation Uni-Verse soothing caressed calm see shore cheer
Sprinkling germination in unblemished verse singing celebration.
Interior impressions brain waves in diversity’s expansive frontier
Liberalism of diverse ingenuity in a Liberal Art transformation.

Vocation Universe irritating rush rash of office domain’s veneer
Covering distain smile upon tarnished goal distorted aberrations.
Exterior expressions brawn slave of regimented routine of austere
Complacency in cloned conformity of a Conservative generation.

From the inner most Uni-Verse
To the outer most Universe,
Merge the inner space
With the outer space,
Within your poetic creation
And blossom forth Poet
With the mind’s dynamic spectrum of the
Poet Phoenix Winged Universal Artmosphere Angel.

David Lester Young 08/01/09 © all rights owned by author
De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-08-03 04:10 PM

quote:
From the inner most Uni-Verse
To the outer most Universe,
Merge the inner space
With the outer space,
Within your poetic creation
And blossom forth Poet
With the mind’s dynamic spectrum of the
Poet Phoenix Winged Universal Artmosphere Angel.

This is very inspiring, dear David!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

2 posted 2009-08-03 04:28 PM

Margherita Thank You, someone asked me why I use Uni-Verse and Universe and I wrote this. I also liked the way it ended, Blessings Poet Angel.

jbstillwater
Member

since 2009-07-03

Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico

3 posted 2009-08-03 05:59 PM

My sentiments, exactly, Dave. In fact, I just posted one along that line.

Great poem!

Jan

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

4 posted 2009-08-03 06:31 PM

jbstillwater Thank You

I will go looking for it.

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