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Open Poetry #45

The rose's fold

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-08-03 09:16 AM

Imperfections, stark
the sun grows tall

brides of June
on chiseled lawns

merlot spilled
on terrace views
and seascapes roam
behind the roses bloom

praise upon
the triumph
of the purple ones

though some fall down
in triple rhyme

the yellow leaf
now leaves her host

and now is when
this starts to loosen.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2009-08-03 09:54 AM

Good morning MicheleROSE ~

"brides of June
on chiseled lawns

merlot spilled
on terrace views
and seascapes roam
behind the roses bloom"

~ Aw, yes! I can see it! I am there! ~ but alas, it is a shame that the Merlot was spilled!

Your penning is blooming lovely!

Linda

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2009-08-03 10:02 AM

Beautiful! I love this!

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

3 posted 2009-08-03 11:08 AM

Vivid clips of a greater image much enjoyed

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-08-03 03:59 PM

You speak the language of flowers so beautifully, dear Michele!

It's always Now and when petals fall it's Now too ... like when we shall close our eyes.

Exquisite imagery.

Love,
Margherita

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

5 posted 2009-08-03 09:31 PM

Beautiful Inkedgoddess! I love roses.

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