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The Turning Tide
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The Turning Tide |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
The troubled tempest passed today beaconed by a welcome sun's ray from a place... I cannot say and a sister's skeletal satirical stories made the soap opera plots seem... all too simple this gentle rain and passing clouds all made for the half full moonlight filled night worth smiling about |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
This is a wonderful write. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
I am really enjoying your writes, martini  shellie my mind won't rest and I don't sleep... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"The troubled tempest passed today beaconed by a welcome sun's ray"  "all made for the half full moonlight filled night" ~ Love this play on the proverbial "half-filled cup". The tone and beauty of this write are "worth smiling about"   EA |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
I enjoyed this dance within your verse and loved the alliterated steps of ""skeletal satirical stories."" |
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