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Somewhere In The Mist (Song)
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Somewhere In The Mist (Song) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Edge of night, dawn of day, I miss you more, than words can say, Dry my eyes, clear my thoughts, I am hurting, pain 10,000 watts, But when I close my eyes, I see you there, singing sweet songs, of love and care, I see your smile, your eyes, Somewhere in the mist.... Time is not my friend, why did you have to go, why did it have to end? you had one more show, My heart is aching, my world is breaking, without you here, I cry another tear, But when I close my eyes, I see you standing there, with arms open wide, the sun in your hair, Where dreams never die, and I will never cry, somewhere in the mist.... What I wouldn't give, just to have you again, I want you to live, I just want you to live.... Somewhere in the mist, I will meet you someday, you and I will kiss, all our troubles fade away, When all is dead and gone, our love will carry on, I will find you waiting.... Somewhere....in... the ....mist...... (I Love You)(Whispers) ~By Millette Lester (2009) |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
You put a number in there in the song, may I suggest using "mega" watts instead. It is more powerful, I think. I love the Lyrics and found that a song does not have the intensity of these powerful lyrics of yours. A song is really a simplistic use of verse. Maybe in tomorrows Nashville powerful lyrics will meet music. It seems you need someone intelligent enough to sing and listen to them in their context's meaning. In Free Speech dialog, we sometimes loose people, if your heart is running true that people need open minds, they will wander back for another lesson. [This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (07-31-2009 10:20 AM).] |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
ARH, this is absolutely beautiful. You are a very talented writer. |
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