Open Poetry #45 |
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Ever Budding Green (Balladeer's WHAT's OUTSIDE YOUR WINDOW challenge) |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
A sheep grazes outside our window, yet we call it Dog, It greets the cars and bleats at us, having mental fog. Around the tree it rings in loops Following me around; A peek a boo sheep-y dog, In hooves, in rhythm clogs. Buckston’s in his doghouse, Guardian of air and land Barking at his shadow, At anything that lays or stands. His specialty is bird, flyin’ high above his roof, For winged things, escapes from him an extra blankin’ woof. Our country home is simple, No other place I’d choose to be, Not far from weed and thistle Or, from flowers on the trees, From wooded hills and shaded valley From graceful running stream, We have it in a nutshell, Life, an ever-budding green. [This message has been edited by miscellanea (07-29-2009 09:50 AM).] |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
misc, I love Dog and Buckston. Your home sounds beautiful. I love country. Thank you for allowing us to look out your window and pet your animals. Alison |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Thanks, Alison. It is beautiful to us, but I tend to see beauty in most things. I love the field of weeds at dusk. (Oh yes, those monstrous things a tractor should undertake!) When Black-eyed Susans peek o'er the closing Queen Anne's lace, the air becomes less dense, spreading coolness upon ones' day; the eyes, now, less focused, with setting of the sun, But soon, the sharpness will display in sparks, when through darkness the fireflies shall come. They'll light the way to magic A place of rhymed delight, where all possibilities commence in twinkling aeroflight With teasing flits and neon shifts, insects play the night Syncopating star-strings, Waking field and mice. Their day has just begun, In darkness they will play Under the watchful constellations in the field of star and hay. ~~misce~~ (Oh my! You've spurred on my muse! I better post this before I lose... it!) Thanks, Alison! misce' |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Sounds like a beautiful place to be. I loved the country, when I was living there. If I could I'd go back to the country. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I appreciate your comment about the country. Country life is... beautiful, but isn't any place you call your home? Home sweet homa, what can I say? It's been good hearing from you again, Oklahoma Rose. I see you have a little homa in your name! How kewl is that? miscellanea |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm so pleased to read about your home environs. They sound so you! Are you a product of your environment or is your environment a product of you? lol ~ Feels warm, natural, relaxed and folksy! My kinda home ~ and people! This was an unexpected treat to read! The more I get to know you and your world the more I like you and your world! ![]() Love & a big, warm hug, Linda ![]() ![]() |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Hey Misce, So if your sheep is called "dog", how did you do in biology class? I'd give up the city any day. Except I need a job! Lovely write. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I also live in the country. Beautiful! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi, beautiful place you live in, but you should send your poem by mail to Balladeer, so he can put it in this special page. Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Earth Angel, It's great to hear from you before I go back to that wonderful institution of learning. (Can hardly wait!) It gives me pleasure to have given you a treat in this little snippet of the crazy animals around my house. It was a treat to me, as well, that a poem surfaced this summer. I was afraid my muse had gone on summer vacation when I was supposed to be the one on summer vacation! Thanks again for your warm comment. I always enjoy hearing from you. Wishing you well! misce' |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Larry, Biology class? Is that the one you talk about adverbs and agitatives? (You know, those little descriptive words that get under your skin and agitates). I did real goood in that class, dissecting phrases and frogs. I think I landed at least a C! Great to hear from you again, Larry! I chuckled at your silly comment! Have a good one, Larry! misce' |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Kaoru, Thank you for sharing, Kaoru. I enjoy reading your writing, too. misce' |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Titia, Thanks for your comment and advice. I'll do just that. How are your sheep doing? We just have the one now. Peanut's become a real pet and pest, but she's as cute as can be. She runs to greet all the cars that drive in, expecting to be petted. What a character she is! Again, thanks for stopping by. misce' |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Our country home is simple, No other place I’d choose to be, Not far from weed and thistle Or, from flowers on the trees, From wooded hills and shaded valley From graceful running stream, We have it in a nutshell, Life, an ever-budding green. Dear Misce, your poem was a delight to read and that last verse is magnificent. you are indeed a lucky lady but I'm sure no more than you deserve. I loved it. love Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I enjoyed being just there with you, dear Miscé, you really transported me there with your vivid imagery. Pet that lovely sheep for me, she is cute! Most beautiful writing! I do love the countryside too, but I would keep a lot of bats to swallow all the mosquitos! Love and joy. Margherita ![]() |
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