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o.le.crépuscule Junior Member
since 2007-07-29
Posts 17partout. |
my tissues die dehydrate crumple under the weight of your hand the one that took the chicken by the neck and snapped it i cringed, remember? i cringed i can feel my skin going up in flames now out in the sun the one that ruined me took my eyes drew them to the ground the one that told me to keep going i swallow my pill make sure it's gone down all the way (because last time it didn't) and lay down i'll be dizzy today but at least i'm not disintegrating |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's been a long while, Kate, since we last read some of your work. I hope you are well... but your imagery...well, you did not disappoint! |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
_____________________________ i can feel my skin going up in flames now out in the sun the one that ruined me took my eyes drew them to the ground ______________________________ lovely writing! shel my mind won't rest and I don't sleep... |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Wow, I like this. You just took me on your poetic ride. Alison |
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