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Open Poetry #45

Aging Groom’s Response

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2009-07-25 08:07 PM

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Oh
As I recall
You wouldn’t look
At me twice

Thinking boring
The equivalent
Of being nice

But now at last
With your nectar gone
To insects more capable
Of disappearing then
You’ve suddenly discovered
What a prince I am

So very well
The two of us
Will play along

As if
Should you flower
Yet once again

I’d have any chance
In comparison

To those champions
Of your youth

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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2009-07-25 09:19 PM

interesting 'write' !

applause !!

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2009-07-25 09:23 PM

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Thank you Bruce

Actually
I think, while not PC,
it's one of the best things
I've lately written.

Thanks again

John

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2009-07-25 11:38 PM

I got a kick out of this, John. A very interesting response. Sometimes I think there comes a point when some things are better remembered than indulged.
Ida

brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

4 posted 2009-07-26 01:59 AM

very clever john

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2009-07-26 03:55 AM

applause.

yann

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2009-07-27 02:12 PM

This may be a more common scene than one realizes.
A write with insight.

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