Open Poetry #45 |
clouds, stars, and dreams |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
clouds, stars, and dreams tree-shadows marching by this deep twilight lake. fine silvered mountaintops swept clean by moonlight and the soft summer wind. heart singing melody; spirit in harmony. nothing to grasp for but clouds, stars, and dreams. --- b. e. adams (7/25/2009) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, yes let's grasp for those dreams, dear Bruce. This is again wonderful! Love, Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A picture of twilight solitude... many times the peaceful place I seek. Well done. |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
To grasp the wind of the verse, and sail ots power, very nice |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Bruce, it is beautiful and well done, some vastness lurks in the images. a very enjoyable read. yann |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce, This just lifted me on the beauty of the words you wrote. Thank you for a breath of calm. Alison |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"fine silvered mountaintops swept clean by moonlight" My favorite part. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
The beauty of night and nature, brought vividly to life by your words... Thank you for those fine words...enjoyed reading them... Goldenrose |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you always bring nature and beautiful images together, such a pleasure to read you.... ~~**~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am so glad I didn't miss this one, Bruce. A perfect read for me today~~ M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bard Bruce, I find it amazing that you are able to continue to write about Nature's beauty and keep it fresh ~ and absolutely gorgeous! ~ Not that Nature doesn't give us an endless supply of 'gorgeousness' to write about ~ but to be able to do what you do, takes mucho talent and mucho love for 'Her'. Love & Nature's Light, Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I agree with Linda, Bruce. I am always amazed at the power of your pen. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
As always, a profound thanks to all who commented on this 'penning' ! [Actually, I believe it is really 'Gaia' writing these things ... simply using my most humble hand!] |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
"fine silvered mountaintops swept clean by moonlight and the soft summer wind." Loved this image....found this to be a simple muse yet no more beautiful than most....enjoyed....peaceseaker |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Oh, I love reaching for the clouds, stars and dreams. |
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