Open Poetry #45 |
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...of Perfect Storms |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
orbed and drifting dewdrop borne on astral stream, I'm fluted summer satin song winging on a dream ancient etch of love line whispered ballad strung, pearled incantation the breathless rise of sun Oh! perfect storm deepened sweet, beneath a trembling calm lyrics burn upon my breast, captivated alms swift singe of solitude, tears scroll without warning, seal your kiss upon my lips your heart upon my morning |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
wow You stun with this orbed and drifting dewdrop borne on astral stream, I'm fluted summer satin song winging on a dream and this swift singe of solitude, tears scroll without warning, seal your kiss upon my lips your heart upon my morning You've plucked this one from some ethereal realm...yowza. L, Heather |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Heather, Thank you for that smile and the happy response! ...magical those ethers. ![]() ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, m'dear Klassy One, this one was surely worth the wait!!! Thy quill doth hath a feather's touch. "song winging on a dream" ~ indeed! ![]() ![]() ![]() Linda ![]() |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
![]() I thought I saw you swinging on a star and listening to the cosmos sigh. ![]() |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Very beautiful - it's magical like storms so often are. A |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
This is very cool and beautiful and fun to read. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh this is very special, it just tugs at the heart so gently. Beautiful work, Klassy Lassy~ and it's good to read you again. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
your writing is delicate and beautiful ![]() shel |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
A very beautiful poem, Klassy Lassy! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Alison, Storms often have silver linings, nes pas? ![]() ```````` Chalmette Guy, it's a soft touch poem, so I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you. ````````` Blues Serenade, ![]() ````````` Hello Shel, I'm glad to meed you here! We have a member in my family we call Chell, too. It has such a soft charm to it. (But sometimes they call her Mac, as well. LOL) I appreciate your gentle comment. `````````` Oklahoma Rose, Thank you for taking time for my poem. ![]() ~~~~~~~~~ I've been enjoying the creative talents of you all and the time you share with me. ~KL |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
OK, so I'm keeping this one. Gorgeous "classy" write. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Midnitesun.... ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is simply awesome, the whole of it, dear Klassy Lassy! Good to read you again! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
so stunning and alluring, klassy. i rather enjoyed this. maranda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Klassy Lassy - this is one Klassy write, lovely... BC |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Margherita ![]() |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Maranda, It's my pleasure, to have you read something I wrote. Thank you. ![]() ~~~~~~~~ Bill, aww, thank you, too, for reading and the compliment. I'm happy it was received well. ![]() |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Stunningly beautiful, Karen. Ida |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Ida, thank you and good morning! ![]() [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (07-25-2009 04:13 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
KL...a tempest in a teapot indeed... the imagery of a perfect storm can sometimes be very frightening. Yet, you've romanticized is wonderfully. And...thanks for checking in on me! ![]() |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Sunshine, it is my pleasure and always a treat to read the beauty in your poems. Thank you, dear heart for the touch. ![]() ![]() |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
I want more klassy ![]() found this in my library and loved it again shel |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Absolutely beautiful, Klassy Lassy. Keeper. Ida |
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