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poindexter39
New Member
since 2009-11-19
Posts 8


0 posted 2010-01-09 01:53 PM





Just one more day, I need to see your face
No more dismay for just one day
IF the only way to see u is for one last time
Coz thats one last time to keep you as mine

what happens when you dont care about the end
whether you die or not
about who loves you a lot
whether i live in a cot

Nothing matters to me, even if I
die a loney man
get hit by a van
or experience a sunburnt tan

im that of the loneliest people
Im feeling small, tiny and feeble

After doing my best
to prevent the pain
the pain of love, failure and heartbreak
i did everything i could for goodness sake

No more to worry
No more to need
I am dying, like a withering seed
i ran out of questions
and im out of answers
so when  nothing is left at the street's bend
I can only say that im loving the end

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MadMarcus
Junior Member
since 2009-11-25
Posts 25
Sweden, Solna
1 posted 2010-01-10 03:54 PM


I see myself in this poem <3
Well done mate.

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