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Funeral Procession |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
Hey hope you like it! Honest comments please -Jaki H ____________________________________ ~Funeral Procession~ the subtle crackling the overwhelming shame a solemn line of students marching towards the flames they sacrifice their lives for a chance to feel success victims to the devil scorched by scholasticism’s stress forward on, march to the beating of the heart slash the ties of friendship prove that you are smart and think nothing of the anger, the fury the disgrace of the parent whose vicarious dreams blow up in his face just walk straight into the fire forget failure and don’t cry sometimes everything comes to nothing your next in line- it’s time to die |
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
wow made me think for sure,kept me reading,great write. keep it up and if ur new welcome from m48. |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
thank you i'm glad you enjoyed it. im not new but i havent been on much lately... i look forward to reading your poems as well! |
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