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Midnight Rose
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Midnight Rose |
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prettypinkrebel Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 104 |
Your like a rose of black still holding my heart I scream in silence As you look at me with a hateful stare only to see me shed the last tear The blood flows from my wrist as my soul intensely fills with sadness As death shows its face the final kiss the razor blade let the blood dismiss I cant take this anymore, this empty lonliness My heart is a pure tent of torment a suicidal abiss The hole of my heart has black bleeding through it silently Leaving me missing you as emotionally i die quietly wondering if you care laying here staring into this midnight rose.... |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Whoa! great description!  -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
I admit, that was gory. Nice literary uses, but hun, if that is you in your poem, don't do it, there are other options. -Kate "What are you!?" |
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